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4:29 AM by ~Faust-XVIII:iconFaust-XVIII:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Urban > Open




I've woken up a little early;
  4:29 AM, a gentle rain is falling
     The morning air tastes
         Like memories
Bitter and metallic, I've tried to forget them
         Unsuccessful in my efforts...
             I decline to accept the light
Closing my eyes, I breathe within;
    I am me, alone and awake
       Attentive of the spasmodic tempo
That surrounds me.
   Subtly Inside, I wish
      For something
          A little more regular
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Author's Comments

First of the 100 themes challenge

I don't own that picture by the way, so I don't take credit for it. I just needed something to convey feeling XD

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~Angels-Losing-Sleep Jul 5, 2009, 4:46:42 PM
A good start to the 100 challenge list. I like the way you decided to lay everything out, and how clean and straightforward it was to read. The picture goes quite nicely with it, though just a tip, you should put a link to where you got the picture from, just in case.

--
"Every time I turn around, I fall in love and find my heart face down, and where it lands is where it should."
-Nickelback
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~Faust-XVIII Jul 6, 2009, 6:12:25 AM
Haha, I'll try and remember that for the next one(s) XD
thanks!

--
All art is exorcism. I paint dreams and visions too; the dreams and visions of my time. Painting is the effort to produce order; order in yourself. There is much chaos in me, much chaos in our time.
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~Angels-Losing-Sleep Jul 6, 2009, 9:04:44 AM
Haha, yeah. Some people tend to get overly touchy about you using their pictures, even if you do say it wasn't your picture. So I tend to put a link to the original just for good measure. XD

--
"Every time I turn around, I fall in love and find my heart face down, and where it lands is where it should."
-Nickelback
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