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Chopin - Waltz -3 in a minor by ~Faust-XVIII:iconFaust-XVIII:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Transgressive > Open


Soft notes

         whisked  so gently off the keys and into the silence


Grace and beauty
       
          a warm emanation of the past


Brought back again by the hands of a master

      Sepia tone memories

             reminiscing for the olden times.
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Walt #3 in a minor op.34 by Chopin, my inspiration.

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~Angels-Losing-Sleep Jan 30, 2009, 10:58:30 PM
Typing in that format is fun, hey? XD
I love the image you portray here. Especially the last two lines...they're so...wistful. Well done!

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~Faust-XVIII Jan 31, 2009, 8:47:50 AM
thanks XD
I really wanted it to connect with the music I was listening to, and I think I accomplished that pretty well. =]

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All art is exorcism. I paint dreams and visions too; the dreams and visions of my time. Painting is the effort to produce order; order in yourself. There is much chaos in me, much chaos in our time.
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~Angels-Losing-Sleep Jan 31, 2009, 11:23:32 AM
Yeah, I'd say you did a great job.

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"Every time I turn around, I fall in love and find my heart face down, and where it lands is where it should."
-Nickelback
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~Faust-XVIII Jan 31, 2009, 7:21:59 PM
thankies!

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All art is exorcism. I paint dreams and visions too; the dreams and visions of my time. Painting is the effort to produce order; order in yourself. There is much chaos in me, much chaos in our time.
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~Angels-Losing-Sleep Feb 1, 2009, 1:01:56 PM
Welcome.

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"Every time I turn around, I fall in love and find my heart face down, and where it lands is where it should."
-Nickelback
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*jamberry-song Mar 18, 2009, 5:28:32 PM
I like it. I like the visual flow and simplicity. Perhaps you could have used a little more concrete imagery, though. But that's the only thing. Lovely piece. :)

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~Faust-XVIII Mar 18, 2009, 5:30:05 PM
thank you very much! Looking back I suppose I could have added a bit more. But it was written in around ten minutes and never edited. So I'm a little proud of it =]

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All art is exorcism. I paint dreams and visions too; the dreams and visions of my time. Painting is the effort to produce order; order in yourself. There is much chaos in me, much chaos in our time.
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*jamberry-song Apr 12, 2009, 9:52:09 AM
"[I]t was written in around ten minutes and never edited."

Well that's a shame.

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~Faust-XVIII Apr 12, 2009, 10:29:17 AM
haha, I can never seem to get back to these things XD

nor can I sit for an hour working on one poem.. my work comes from inspiration, planning it ruins the whole process.

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All art is exorcism. I paint dreams and visions too; the dreams and visions of my time. Painting is the effort to produce order; order in yourself. There is much chaos in me, much chaos in our time.
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