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Take from my hands this fickle rose
   It's petals begin to fade
And place it where the other grows
   In a place of peaceful shade

Remember when, in time long passed
   I gave to thee that graceful token
In hopes our love would last?
   Nevermore to be so broken..

But love, as all things be
   Ne'er is an easy road
But rough, as far as I can see
   So weighted by this heavy load

I'll never forget those moments shared
   Beneath the grinning sky
When each one of us, so truly cared
   "Until the day we die"

Take from my hands this fickle rose
   Take it from my failing grasp
For this breath, I've coldly chose
   To be my dying gasp
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No clue. Wrote this last night. It's not relevant to anything in my life right now.. Perhaps it's influenced by the sad violin music I'm listening too =[

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:iconpre-existence:
Thats beautiful, Barret. Your amazing.

--
Of all who give and receive gifts, such as they are wisest. Everywhere they are wisest. They are the magi.
~ Gift of the Magi, by O. Henry
:iconfaust-xviii:
Thank you very much, you just made my day =D

lmao.

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All art is exorcism. I paint dreams and visions too; the dreams and visions of my time. Painting is the effort to produce order; order in yourself. There is much chaos in me, much chaos in our time.
:iconpre-existence:
Just speaking the truth :P

--
Of all who give and receive gifts, such as they are wisest. Everywhere they are wisest. They are the magi.
~ Gift of the Magi, by O. Henry
:iconfaust-xviii:
=] <feels special>

lmao
I'm in a good mood
even though..
I'm sick.

--
All art is exorcism. I paint dreams and visions too; the dreams and visions of my time. Painting is the effort to produce order; order in yourself. There is much chaos in me, much chaos in our time.
:iconpre-existence:
i was.
then i fucked up my toe.

--
Of all who give and receive gifts, such as they are wisest. Everywhere they are wisest. They are the magi.
~ Gift of the Magi, by O. Henry
:iconfaust-xviii:
roflmao.

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All art is exorcism. I paint dreams and visions too; the dreams and visions of my time. Painting is the effort to produce order; order in yourself. There is much chaos in me, much chaos in our time.
:iconangels-losing-sleep:
I love the second to last stanza...it flows quite nicely. Excellent work on this piece.

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"Every time I turn around, I fall in love and find my heart face down, and where it lands is where it should."
-Nickelback
:iconfaust-xviii:
Thank you!! =D
I like the last stanza the most..
how it's.. so .. sudden XD

--
All art is exorcism. I paint dreams and visions too; the dreams and visions of my time. Painting is the effort to produce order; order in yourself. There is much chaos in me, much chaos in our time.
:iconangels-losing-sleep:
Welcome.
Haha, nice. XD

--
"Every time I turn around, I fall in love and find my heart face down, and where it lands is where it should."
-Nickelback

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